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I like English lessons very much. My English teacher often cracks jokes during English class, and makes us all laugh. He likes to use games as a way to teach us English. We all find it rather interesting.
Because he tell jokes in class,which makes everyone laugh, when others laugh, which would make me having sort of accomplishment feelings as well. I think telling joke in class, which can make the lessons more lively.
Crab son said: "I lost my concentration in school today and had been punished." Crab mother asked:"How did the teacher punish you?"Crab son replied:"he wanted me to walk straight ahead!"